I have to say the story was nice and simple humourous Mario tale with slight Pokemon elements ended up turning into multi franchise war 20 years in the future. Man, after typing that this story really is messed up!
I have to say that everyone makes mistakes, even pro's/masters of the whatever their doing stuff up and start again. That suprisingly is something no many people relise, so we shouldn't be to shocked that the story got broken and that is what we should be happy about.
@ Nester, thank you for be honest and saying that.
@ Old Man Rupee, I personally don't want to end it now but I propose for one of these three solutions.
1. Restart the story at a good point in it when it was nice and simple and with little outside franchise involvement, unfortunatly that would be the first place where Savage Adam wrote. (Sorry!) If it was for me not saying that the pig spaceship belonged to Orbulon this whole thing with Porjky would have never happened.
2. I'll make a short better version of the last part of the story I wrote. (As in more of the length of the first part I wrote in terms of length).
3. Errr . . . Cliffhanger ending anyone?
"And so all the characters from the story, good and bad, happened to gather in one spot for no reason at all. When suddenly a giant cliff face erupted from the ground leaving them all hanging on for their lives."
To be contiuned.
Last Edit: Mar 25, 2008 23:18:35 GMT -5 by Da Robot