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Post by Smashchu on Mar 26, 2006 20:37:27 GMT -5
www.geocities.com/smashchuThis is my site. Im putting it here so I can get some feedback, so tell me what you think. Also does anyone think it will help if I get its own Domain name and is there enough content? Thanks 
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Post by Fryguy64 on Mar 27, 2006 3:57:13 GMT -5
You have good content, and I can see how it can expand into the future... but you have REALLY lousy design. Scrolling text, ugly tables, little animated gifs, text logo... However, navigation is consistent, and at the end of each link is information. Which is a good thing. I'd say make sure your table borderwidth is zero, and cellpadding is up a bit. Give your menu and title bar a background colour, and create some kind of graphic for your logo. Lose the dancing Mario. And get out of Yahoo!! Free servers are a ghastly stain upon the crotch of the internet. EDIT: I'd just like to add, that I don't mean all this to put it down... I gave you the same treatment I give most websites that ask me to affiliate... I review them, being as critical as possible. Not to break them, but to drive them to make it better. Besides, you came out of it okay. If I didn't like what you were trying to do, I wouldn't have posted  |
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Post by Dances in Undergarments on Mar 27, 2006 4:51:45 GMT -5
Spell check is your friend.
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Post by Smashchu on Mar 27, 2006 15:51:05 GMT -5
Thanks alot. And Fry I know your not putting my site down and this is what I wanted. I do think I need spell check. Anyone here know how to spell check in Dreamwever.
As for the freewebs I will be changing it soon. However it may be a while since I will be saving up to inport a DS Lite. Not only that I have no job right now; luckly Im still a kid so I wont be paying bills. Untill then I'll be keeping up with this so fell free to check in.
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Post by Old Man Rupee on Mar 27, 2006 15:53:46 GMT -5
Spell check is your friend. Yes, I was going to mention spelling (but who am I to judge?). But otherwise, a pretty good little endeavor! (damn it, is that how you spell "endeavor"?) |
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Post by Doubutsu80 on Mar 27, 2006 16:02:50 GMT -5
I agree on what everyone else has said about the site. Overall I say, good website |
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Post by Smashchu on Mar 27, 2006 16:50:38 GMT -5
I am trying to put a new logo in there but Im not sure if its not there or its just I cant see it. Let me know If you guys can see it. I'll keep working on it.
EDIT: This is annyoing
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Balloon Fighter
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Post by Saim on Mar 27, 2006 17:04:34 GMT -5
Thanks alot. And Fry I know your not putting my site down and this is what I wanted. I do think I need spell check. Anyone here know how to spell check in Dreamwever. As for the freewebs I will be changing it soon. However it may be a while since I will be saving up to inport a DS Lite. Not only that I have no job right now; luckly Im still a kid so I wont be paying bills. Untill then I'll be keeping up with this so fell free to check in. Just copy the writing into word and you can spellcheck it. Dreamweaver doesn't use spellcheck. Wait... you use Dreamweaver? Do you know how to move things freely around the program without using layers? Layers look different for each person's computer, so they really suck. Maybe you could also have a "Virtual Console" page. And a forums. You can't go wrong with a forums! Wait... you do have one. *joins* |
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Post by Smashchu on Mar 27, 2006 17:11:27 GMT -5
I will add a virtual console later, but first I must figure out why this flash isn't working. It was a good flash too  . Can anyone tell me if the code is right(also I know the images arn't working, so let me fix them). |
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Post by Saim on Mar 27, 2006 17:19:56 GMT -5
I will add a virtual console later, but first I must figure out why this flash isn't working. It was a good flash too . Can anyone tell me if the code is right(also I know the images arn't working, so let me fix them). Do you have Macromedia Flash? Well, go into insert, go into media, then go into flash. Choose the flash you want. |
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Post by Smashchu on Mar 27, 2006 19:29:32 GMT -5
Made a few changes. Nothing spectacular but might be better. No spell ckeck yet though. I have Homework so I wont fix up all the images right now.
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Balloon Fighter
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Post by Saim on Mar 28, 2006 16:04:20 GMT -5
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Post by mrmolecule on Mar 28, 2006 17:56:43 GMT -5
All the pictures are broken! It's like I'm on archive.org!
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Post by Smashchu on Mar 28, 2006 18:06:42 GMT -5
When I upload pages the links become broken. I can fix them but I just havn't got around to it. I hope to tonight but now I have to mow the lawn
Wait just a bit longer.
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Post by Doubutsu80 on Mar 28, 2006 20:04:43 GMT -5
I say good site
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. Can anyone tell me if the code is right(also I know the images arn't working, so let me fix them).